I am a Year 6 student at Glen Innes School in Auckland, New Zealand. I am in Room 11 and my teacher is Mr Ramkolowan.
Friday, 15 May 2015
My Rugby Game
Intro:
‘Today's the day,Today's the day !’I said as I was running quickly down the into the kitchen to have breakfast.My mum told me to get ready for my rugby game against Sylvia Park school.
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As I arrived at Dunkirk fields I scattered out of the car so excited because it was my first game playing against another school.While my team mates arrived we started to warm up.Everyone in my team was here ‘Finally’ said my coach.
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During the game,parents and friends were cheering on for their children.
My mum was really proud of me because I did some great teamwork.
I asked my mum if we could go out for some delicious dinner tonight.
When I got home my mum showed my dad the game on the video camera.At six o'clock my mum and dad took me and my siblings out t dinner.
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After we finished eating at the Chinese takeaways we went back home and I had to go back to bed,but me and my sister stayed awake until ten o’clock at night.
Conclusion
I was so tired I plopped onto my bed.’Night Mum’ I said.
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